Draft Voice over

This is our draft of the voice over.
Dear Ajmal,

I still write to you every day hoping one day you will write back.

(type writer)

I remember the way you made me feel back when we were young. The excitement, the happiness you brought me..(pause)..

(ronni and mo hugging or staring into each others eyes)

The sneeking around gave us a dramatic, sensational feeling, like we were in a romantic film.. the love movie of the century which had people in tears when walking out the cinema!

(ronins old eye – sound bride into rain- graphic match)

By this time i knew you would be leaving your house, on your bicycle, avoiding the road my parents take. Its that time of the week, tick tock..(pause).. tick tock. five to six pm. the time i looked forward to all week. Friday evening. (show parents leaving)

(close up of the bike wheel or mo on bike)

Social class

These are words that are known to define your class:

How titles come up in opening sequences

I looked at the following 3 opening sequences to see which names of the cast and crew come up in the first 2 minutes of the film.

THE KITERUNNER

Name of studio:
Name of production company:


TAKERS

Name of studio:
Name of production company:

Group production meeting

A member of our group (Tamsyn) has the ability to do make young people look old with the use of make up. We can use this as an advantage and make young characters look old and realistic rather than ask old people to act for our video. We can use make up to change a persons looks and create effect in our video. 

Preliminary task Feed the fish finished

WWW: Point of view shot is very good. Looks realistic. Good use of sound, in time.

EBI: Shoot the whole footage from different camera angles. Avoid jump cuts. continuity error.

FEEDBACK:
. We need to work on shot transitions, therefore we need better footage.
. 180 degree rule works
. Our match on action also worked well
. Although we had some continuity errors

Feed the fish first attempt

This is the start of our 'feed the fish' video, we will need to edit some bits to improve the minor errors to make it flow effectively. for example we will re shoot the scene of Tamsin drinking from the cup as we have violated the 180 degree rule and the way it cuts, theres a minor jump which looks odd.

Feed the fish finished

Feed the fish