Draft Voice over

This is our draft of the voice over.
Dear Ajmal,

I still write to you every day hoping one day you will write back.

(type writer)

I remember the way you made me feel back when we were young. The excitement, the happiness you brought me..(pause)..

(ronni and mo hugging or staring into each others eyes)

The sneeking around gave us a dramatic, sensational feeling, like we were in a romantic film.. the love movie of the century which had people in tears when walking out the cinema!

(ronins old eye – sound bride into rain- graphic match)

By this time i knew you would be leaving your house, on your bicycle, avoiding the road my parents take. Its that time of the week, tick tock..(pause).. tick tock. five to six pm. the time i looked forward to all week. Friday evening. (show parents leaving)

(close up of the bike wheel or mo on bike)